tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817214483007465548.post204468023528319848..comments2024-03-25T15:24:38.744+01:00Comments on Gareth's Short Story Blog: The Storm that Changed the WorldUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817214483007465548.post-83562342695613658922015-07-25T08:49:36.993+02:002015-07-25T08:49:36.993+02:00Sorry for the typos. I meant 'Effect on nature...Sorry for the typos. I meant 'Effect on nature" and "petrichor". Writing comments in bed on a phone is not the easiest thing in the world (and effing autocorection)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817214483007465548.post-50478272539976352552015-07-25T07:35:01.149+02:002015-07-25T07:35:01.149+02:00That's my favourite story this week. The descr...That's my favourite story this week. The description of the rain and its effect of nature made my nostrils feel this petrichore too:-) you used the framing device thus connecting the two paragrphs so skillfully ('vividness reserved for dreams' 'new world'). <br />Oh and the interactive elements and the end of the story made me smile (but, frankly, couldn't stop wondering how a 14 year old who never kissed before Could make his tongue do battle like Errol Flynn in his prime :-) hehe). Loved it:-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817214483007465548.post-29756071356937136582015-07-21T10:56:49.976+02:002015-07-21T10:56:49.976+02:00I feel thunderstruck !I feel thunderstruck !Petra Goláňovánoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817214483007465548.post-79641274176905807962015-07-21T09:45:39.800+02:002015-07-21T09:45:39.800+02:00Charming, Mr Davies :-) good start of the day :-)
...Charming, Mr Davies :-) good start of the day :-)<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com