tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817214483007465548.post7502426697555148824..comments2024-03-25T15:24:38.744+01:00Comments on Gareth's Short Story Blog: Fox from HoundsUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817214483007465548.post-28353650036915474102017-03-01T13:31:02.986+01:002017-03-01T13:31:02.986+01:00thank you
thank you <br />Garethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06498547549063645097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817214483007465548.post-41650552766810246962017-03-01T13:26:06.491+01:002017-03-01T13:26:06.491+01:00It does sound right. At least I like itIt does sound right. At least I like itAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817214483007465548.post-23907671508741955162017-03-01T13:16:58.412+01:002017-03-01T13:16:58.412+01:00I just played with it four or five times so nothin...I just played with it four or five times so nothing sounds right now :-)Garethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06498547549063645097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817214483007465548.post-40133642049212849692017-03-01T11:49:59.440+01:002017-03-01T11:49:59.440+01:00Why not sure you've got it right?Why not sure you've got it right?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817214483007465548.post-35642607544205242442017-03-01T11:37:32.470+01:002017-03-01T11:37:32.470+01:00I like that line but I am not sure I've got it...I like that line but I am not sure I've got it quite right. But thank you. <br />Garethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06498547549063645097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817214483007465548.post-72496982201711739382017-03-01T00:18:22.373+01:002017-03-01T00:18:22.373+01:00There are plenty of biographies describing the cha...There are plenty of biographies describing the character´s feelings at tense moments. I mostly can´t unify the writer´s ideas and the characters possible feelings. There are so many cultural differences, the people were brough up in a different way, the family background was different, different education, different experiences... I always view it as a fiction. But I must say that this story was very vivid and in the last paragraph I was standing next to Federico by the ditch.J.P.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13864674535373665681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817214483007465548.post-60352103107571931782017-03-01T00:03:32.489+01:002017-03-01T00:03:32.489+01:00Pity you don't do the lines of the week any mo...Pity you don't do the lines of the week any more. I would nominate the first line: The lullaby of cricket song and clink of wine glasses accompanied the soft smell of young oregano on the warm breeze.... I love it when you refer to the four senses in your descriptions. The story is very interesting and I also like the last line as petrichor is one of my favourite words. Thank youAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com