Thursday, 15 October 2015

Chardonnay



This is a complete experiment, the first time I have ever written a script. It's an experiment, wanted to try it. Let me know what you think. 
There is audio but I didn't do the voices or read the stage directions so it doesn't really work.  But you might like it for the accent. Apologies for the bad language.
For audio click here.

 





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7 comments:

  1. Anonymous15 October 2015 at 10:14

    Very filmic. I can easily imagine the scene as this dialogue is vivid and dynamic.
    And I am shocked by the topic of the conversation:-) 17-year-olds??? ....Oh wait, I have forgotten the UK has the highest juvenile pregnancy rate in Europe... but maybe it happens somehwre ele as well. Did you overhear such conversation or what?

    And: Did you use a real typewriter???

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    1. Gareth15 October 2015 at 11:07

      No, but I think that is the industry standard format, I used a word template :-)

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    2. Anonymous15 October 2015 at 11:27

      you are welcome

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  2. Petra Goláňová15 October 2015 at 10:48

    I really enjoyed it. I can imagine watching it on a stage. I also like the name Chardonnay, it reminds me of French wine.

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  3. Anonymous15 October 2015 at 19:19

    Something new, i like it :-) i enjoyed the audio as well, made me smile :-)

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  4. Petra Goláňová17 October 2015 at 08:47

    'Lines of the week' :
    ' I shagged Chardonnay too '

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