| 
Everywhere I looked the man was there, taller
  than me, older too. He had grey hair,  was balding and had smudged glasses that perched on his
  nose. He just happened to
  be standing behind me at check in, sitting next to be at the gate, he sat two
  rows behind on the plane and now, just coincidentally, he was leaning against
  the same counter as we waited for our baggage.  
I could tell he was watching me, appraising
  me. I was his quarry and he was the bounty hunter. He must have known I had the information and
  I was going to meet Louisa for the hand over. Was he going to intercept me
  before the meet or wait until the act was in process and catch me red handed?
  I had to try to lose him. 
I wanted to get my luggage quickly so I could
  get out of the airport and into the taxi before he got his. But maybe there
  was no bag, why would he have a bag? That would slow him down.  
I wondered if he had back up, he didn’t look
  like he could take me on his own. But looks could be deceptive, I’d learnt that the hard way. I had to make
  a decision, go ahead with the meet or abandon it? 
My bag was first out, I had to get away. 
I
  grabbed at it and headed for the nothing to declare channel. Not looking
  back, not looking around. I’d get into the taxi and worry about it then. But
  before I got out of customs, two men intercepted me.  The game was up, the moment had come.  | 
Everywhere I looked the man was there, 
shorter than me, younger too. He had salt and
  pepper hair, stubble and a dark monobrow. He just happened to be standing in front of me at check in, came to sit
  next me at the gate, he was just in front of me on the plane and now, just
  coincidentally, he was leaning against the same counter as we waited for our
  baggage.  
I could tell he was watching me, appraising
  me. I was his quarry and he was the bounty hunter. He must have known I had
  the stolen diamonds and I was on my way to the dealers to make the sale. Was
  he going to intercept me before the deal or wait until the act was in progress
  and catch me red handed? I had to try to lose him.  
I hoped my luggage would be first out, then I
  could get away and get in a taxi before he got his bag. But then again maybe
  he didn’t have a bag and was just waiting for me to collect mine.  
I didn’t like the look of him. He looked mean
  and a little unhinged. The way he appraised me unnerved me. I had to make up my mind, should I go to
  Mario’s and blow the whole thing or wait a while? 
My bag was second out, I had to get away. I
  grabbed at it and headed for the nothing to declare channel. Not looking back, not looking around. I’d go up to
  departures, grab a coffee and watch from there. But before I got out of
  customs, two men intercepted me and whisked me to an interview room. I tried to look around but I couldn’t see him anywhere but I knew the bastard must have tipped
  them off. | 
A collection of short stories written by Gareth Davies author of novels Maggie’s Milkman and Extraordinary Rendition. Over 800 free short stories and 100 poems. Please note all works are first drafts. Enjoy, leave comments, share on social media and be inspired. Check out the details of my novels here http://garethdaviesauthor.blogspot.com
Wednesday, 17 September 2014
Paranoid
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