Thursday, 15 October 2015


This is a complete experiment, the first time I have ever written a script. It's an experiment, wanted to try it. Let me know what you think. 
There is audio but I didn't do the voices or read the stage directions so it doesn't really work.  But you might like it for the accent. Apologies for the bad language.
For audio click here.



  1. Very filmic. I can easily imagine the scene as this dialogue is vivid and dynamic.
    And I am shocked by the topic of the conversation:-) 17-year-olds??? ....Oh wait, I have forgotten the UK has the highest juvenile pregnancy rate in Europe... but maybe it happens somehwre ele as well. Did you overhear such conversation or what?

    And: Did you use a real typewriter???

    1. No, but I think that is the industry standard format, I used a word template :-)

    2. you are welcome

  2. Petra Goláňová15 October 2015 at 10:48

    I really enjoyed it. I can imagine watching it on a stage. I also like the name Chardonnay, it reminds me of French wine.

  3. Something new, i like it :-) i enjoyed the audio as well, made me smile :-)

  4. Petra Goláňová17 October 2015 at 08:47

    'Lines of the week' :
    ' I shagged Chardonnay too '