Up
until then it had been one of those great days, the kind of day that someone
would write a song about in years to come. The gang had gone to the beach with
a guitar, a ball, a create of ale, lashings of suntan lotion and that gorgeous feeling
of not having to study anymore. 8 people who could live for the moment, forget
about exam results, forget about the fact that gap years and university would
soon send the gang to all corners of the globe
.
Joe
had spent the day digging a hole, he’d joked about reaching Australia. But the
others began to think he was serious after seeing the dedication he was putting
into it, if he’d worked that hard on his exams he’d be going to Cambridge not Milton Keynes technical college.
‘We
could bury you in that’ laughed Tom.
‘Like
to see you try’ said Joe – it was a challenge that Tom couldn’t resist, he
nudged Eddy and between them they started filling the hole Joe was standing in.
Everyone
was laughing including Joe, he was giving only token resistance. It was almost
as if he had dug the hole hoping that someone would then bury him in it.
Before
long only Joe’s head was visible, Emma lit a cigarette and popped it into his
mouth, while Eddie put a sunhat on Joe’s head. Camera phones were clicking and
laughter filled the air.
But
then the gang became aware of screams and shouts from the promenade, they
looked at what the fuss was but the bystanders seemed to be waving at them.
They felt the problem before they saw it as cold
water started lapping at their feet. So engrossed had they been in tightly
packing sand around their friend that they hadn’t noticed the tide rushing in.
The girls screamed as the boys panicked, they all dug
at the sand with their hands while Joe wriggled trying to free himself. The sea
was beginning to lap Joe's neck more regularly, making the sand he was buried
him more gloopy and gluey. Digging it was just causing it to fall in on itself,
each handful dug away would reform around the stricken teen. Laughter had
turned to tears, fun to fear and the song to a potentially sombre newspaper article.
They were powerless, nothing that the gang were doing was helping
the situation, their frantic efforts were fruitless; Joe’s body was still immersed
in the sand and the sea was now regularly enveloping their friend who was
really beginning to panic, tipping his neck back to stop the water getting into
his mouth and nose.
Just
when all seemed lost, two burly men appeared from nowhere and pushed the two
hapless, breathless boys out of the way. They were dressed in lifeguard gear
and were built like Olympic swimmers. Within seconds they had delved their
hands in the sand, located Joe’s armpits and then, with a one, two, three
yanked a very relieved young man from the muddy sand.
good suspense:) I was really worried...
ReplyDeleteThank you :-) unfortunately i can't write unhappy endings
Deletehmmm....as a graet writer you definitely should have some unhappy endings....:) maybe just stop somewhere and not write the ending at all to leave the reader with his own thoughts...? this is something that just came into my mind...
ReplyDeleteOh,i somehow thought there would be a different archive story today.
ReplyDeletealways open to suggestions
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