This is the 3rd Part of the 'Just a Gigolo' story.
Part 1 here
Part 2 here
Warning: This story does allude to scenes of an 'adult' nature.
Helen lay in bed alone, naked, satisfied. She heard the front door close
gently and smiled a little, wicked grin to herself. She couldn’t believe she had
just paid for sex, it was naughty, sleazy, dirty, but she’d loved it! It was
exactly what she wanted, no strings, no emotional attachments, just a business
transaction. Small beads of perspiration glistened on her forehead as she lay
there contentedly, her body still slightly quivering. He’d touched her so
gently, so tenderly and had patiently explored her body looking for and finding for
the magic spots. She closed her eyes and shivered as she remembered the way
he’d used his fingers on her neck like a concert pianist expertly caressing his
keys. Her whole body had been his concerto and he’d mastered it with skill.
Starting slowly and gently before building up to a crashing crescendo sending
seismic waves throughout her body.
It had been good, very good, but if she was honest there was something missing, yes concert pianist was a good analogy, confined by the
notes of another, a skill learned and delivered not instinctively played. She
knew it was a bit churlish to complain, the performance had been professional
and near faultless but there had been no soul, no passion. Next time she’d look
for a jazz musician, someone that will be willing to go with the flow,
improvise - take a few risks.
Dinner with Christie and Zoe was fun, they were all ears; desperate to
know what it was like, how she’d felt. She enjoyed the attention, hammed it up
a little, glossed over the awkward start and the clinicalness of it. Instead
she loitered on the fine detail, the things that have made her smile since.
‘So will you see him again?’ Christie asked.
‘No, no, he did the job, I have no need for him.’ Her tone was cool,
flippant even.
‘But surely there was some kind of emotional involvement?’ Zoe took over
the interrogation.
‘You know, I’ve been thinking about this. There wasn’t and I think the
reason why was that there was none of the small talk after, no spooning, no
cuddles, no promises. Almost as soon as it was over I kicked him out of the
house.’
‘Really?’ Zoe she couldn’t believe it,
‘Yep, you don’t linger in a shop after you’ve bought the goods do you?’ Helen
smiled.
As they left her phone alerted Helen to the fact that she had missed
calls, there’d been no signal in the pizza place and now it was frantically
trying to catch up. She dug around in her bag for her phone and looked at the
screen; three missed calls, all from Bryn. That was one other thing she hadn’t
told the girls, Bryn had been calling and texting her, asking for a date. She
slipped the phone back into her bag. It wasn’t her who had got trapped in a web
of emotional involvement, it was him.
is there any hope for him?
ReplyDeleteand I would like to add that I wrote a quick comment "no" under the first part of this story.... maybe he should not have got involved in this kind of story... it always means trouble... but on the other hand, she may reciprocate his feelings eventually, which I would love to see:):)
ReplyDeleteWhat'ss interesting from the comments on here and on my Facebook page is how people are routing for the guy in this story. :-)
ReplyDeleteAlthough a great many your fictional female characters are cold without any emotion, in real life women are emotional. That's why all the comments concerning this story (obviously woman's comments) express positive attitudes towards him even though he at first had the sex for money. I don't know your experiences but from my point of view, the majority of women seek emotional involvement when having sex (doesn't need to be love), referring to his worries in the second part - whether his body works always professionally or not is not so important, it’s male’s point of view. That's why the female readers love Bryan now. I really enjoyed this story and was moved by it. It had absolutely unexpected ending. Thank you. Alex
DeleteWould you be brave enough to record this one too? :):)
ReplyDeleteI'd have to do all parts of it ... so ... we'll see if i have time
Deleteyou have to do only the two parts of it. The first one has a recording:)
ReplyDelete:-) thanks.
ReplyDeleteCan I get Bryn's phone number?:):)
ReplyDeleteI’m sure it could nbe arranged :-)
Delete:-)
ReplyDeleteI bet Helen is singing this now: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Aj_OJDhxmd8
ReplyDeleteGood point but actually this had slipped my mind when I wrote the poem
ReplyDeleteThe same Helen? http://garethsshortstoryblog.blogspot.de/2014/06/the-piano.html
ReplyDeleteNo actually, a completely different thought process
DeleteI know. You don't need to be so patronizing. Just noticed the coincidence that both stories (i thought of them when I read Friday's poem) are about a piano concerto (one metaphorical and one literal) and they have the characters with the same name. That's it.
DeleteSorry, didn't mean to be patronising, I thought we were still comparing this one to the poem. My bad, I didn't read your post properly.
DeleteTBH when I wrote the poem I'd forgotten about both of these Helens, and the poem is not about a Helen.
And you are right it is a weird coincidence. :-)