Kia sat in the darkness and watched the snow fall gently;
the flakes meandered to earth looking like they would never hit the ground.
Sometimes they would catch on gusts of wind making them dance and defy gravity
before continuing on their serene path to earth. Sometimes they would come
together and hug, the clumps of snow still in no hurry to finish their journey.
She was mesmerised, she could watch it snow all day and all night. She was
fascinated by the lazy, unhurried way the flakes fell. She wished she could
live her life like that, dancing, hugging and quietly going about her business.
But how could something so gentle, so languid cause such
disruption? She knew if it carried on like this then tomorrow there would be
chaos on the streets. She took a sip of her tea, her eyes not leaving the
flakes outside her window. Their little
street was deserted, not a soul in sight, everyone was sheltering from the
snow, using the glow of their televisions and computer screens to keep them
warm. The weak streetlights illuminated
the falling snow, giving it the spotlight it needed to entertain its adoring
fans. Kia cupped her tea, feeling cosy. She was still glued to the spectacle
like her classmates would no doubt be glued to Game of Thrones; enthralled by
the drama, gripped by the tension but slightly uneasy about what might happen
next.
She could see the dark hills in the background, they were
already topped with a snow icing giving them an eerie glow. She wondered what
it would be like to be on those hills now, out alone in the cold, in the dark,
in the snow, would she be scared, or would the adrenaline pump the blood giving
her a thrill?
She’d walked those hills with Gregor just hours ago, a
romantic walk on a cold winter’s day; wrapped up in coats and scarves and
bobble hats, with the promise of hot tea and cake on their return. It hadn’t
been snowing then but it had been bitterly cold, Kia’s cheeks, nose, fingers
and toes had been numb with cold, but it had been worth it. She’d enjoyed watching
the dark, metallic clouds gather threatening snow and loved watching the weak
sunlight disappear leaving orange streaks across the sky as darkness began to
engulf them. They agreed they should head home before it got too dark to find
their way back down to the safety of their student flat. Then she’d hugged him
and felt the cold blade in her hand and the satisfying feeling as it ripped
through his layers and punctured his skin as they embraced. He fell to his
knees, let out a pathetic whimpered ‘I thought you’d forgiven me,’ before
collapsing on the ground in a heap.
How wicked! You lull the reader into a sense of tranquil serenity, with gentle rythm of the story and your quiet, husky voice and then... bang! how cruel (but powerful)
ReplyDelete"Bitter sweet symphony", so poetic, so realistic !
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