Hailstones lashed down outside the window creating an almighty cacophony
on the Perspex roof of the greenhouse below. Lucy looked at her phone for the
umpteenth time that day before looking back at the grim weather. The hails were
bouncing off the tarmac and the puddles growing before Lucy’s eyes. It was 2pm
but it was dark the clouds had crowded Lucy in, making her feel claustrophobic,
the gloom and the artificial light made her feel tired and lethargic, while her
stubbornly silent phone made her feel lonely and unloved. She watched lighter
wisps of clouds drift across the shield of black ones, the hailstorm had stopped
but the rain still hammered down on the plastic roof below. Lucy twiddled the phone
in her hand, determined not to look at it again… yet. She knew she’d look at it
eventually, and knew what it would tell her; the time and nothing else.
Lucy hadn’t smiled so much in a long, long time as she had done the
previous night. George had been the perfect date, funny, witty, interesting
with old-fashioned manners – he even offered to pay for dinner which despite
Lucy’s feminist instincts, she accepted with glee. It was so rare to find a
real gentlemen these days; most of her recent dates had been men who were
already in love... with themselves. They’d talked about themselves, preened
themselves and bigged themselves up, but George had asked questions, listened,
laughed in all the right places and, when it was his time to talk, he had a cute
self-deprecating humour that grew out of an assured self-confidence. He’d
walked her home but hadn’t made unwanted advances, (the advances would have
been welcome but Lucy was pleased that he hadn’t.) His last words had been
‘I’ll text you tomorrow’ and Lucy’s smile had lasted all night and well into
the morning.
But she wasn’t smiling now. Now the frown lines on her face were so deep
that it could have been made by a plough. He hadn’t texted and he wasn’t ever
going to text, just like it wasn’t ever going to stop raining. George was just
like the rest of them but he’d just been good at disguising it. No wonder he
didn’t want to come in last night, he obviously couldn’t wait to get away from
her. Another wasted evening, another wasted day.
‘C’mon Lucy’ she said to herself, she always spoke aloud when she was
alone and upset with herself, she kind of took on her mother's scolding voice. ‘Sort yourself out, you can’t stand here waiting for nothing all day.’
She smiled to herself, a half smile but at least it was a start. She turned
away from the rain, threw the phone on to the sofa and tried to concentrate on
the report she had taken the day off to write. Her talking to had worked, she
worked, she wrote, she ctrlCeed and ctrlVeed, she crafted and created a report
that even her boss couldn’t criticise. She glanced at her computer clock,
16.23, she’d actually managed to go 2 hours without looking at her phone. She
glanced over at the window, had the rain actually stopped? Were there actually
patches of weak blue sky peering through the clouds?
She got up and looked for her phone. It had bounced on the sofa and was
wedged between the two cushions. There was a message, how hadn’t she heard it?
It was from George! Before she even opened it she did a little dance for joy.
She slid her finger across the screen and read the message.
‘Sorry stupid meetings all day but really enjoyed last night. Wanna meet
again tomorrow?’
Lucy grinned, the perfect message from her perfect gentleman. She kissed
her phone and hugged it to her chest, of course she wanted to meet again
tomorrow. Now all she had to do was think of how to reply.
I would like to get you back to this story.. a 2nd part? :-) and also like to hear your voice ;-)
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