A lot of people have asked me how this story ends so this is for you. For part one of this story click here and for part two click here
Amy sat at the table waiting for Ted to come back from the
toilet. It was a nice place, a place she’d never been before, the service was
good, the food great and a nice atmosphere. They were sitting outside in the
beer garden, there was a general hum of contentment and the clink of cutlery on
plates but there were no screaming kids like so many places these days.
After the first date she’d ignored Ted for a few days but in the
end she’d felt a bit sorry for him and stopped avoiding him. He’d been sweet, he
seemed to realise he’d made a bit of a cock up. At first she’d resisted his
requests for a second chance but what the hell, she liked him and we all make
mistakes, the trick is to learn from them. And on the evidence of tonight, Ted
had certainly learnt. He was dressed to
impress, smart chinos, smart shirt, he’d even had a shave, and this place? Well
it was definitely one she’d come back to.
The orange glow of the sunset that tinted the sky couldn’t
disguise the sinister nature of the clouds building in the distance. Try as
they might to look like innocent, they would soon bring a huge downpour. Amy
guessed it was about time to go home, but that meant making a decision. She
thought about the evening, it had been good. Ted was funny, eloquent and
interesting. But… what was it? What was the but?
If this had been first date proper, then the fact that Amy hadn’t
got a word in edgeways wouldn’t have bothered her. She’d have put it down to
his nerves. But the more she thought
about it, the more she realised that this guy always talked about himself; when
they chatted in work it was always, his dog, his views, his weekend. She wondered
if he knew anything about her.
She knew what her friends would say -they`’d say it was her
responsibility to get a word in edgeways, impose herself. But was it? Was it
really? Shouldn’t he somehow show some interest in her? Also it wasn’t the
first date was it? The first date had been a disaster, what had he said when he
apologised, “I just didn’t think”. Didn’t think, the words bounced around her
brain like a pinball. She wanted someone who thought. She wanted someone who
considered. She wanted someone who noticed. Ted was too caught up in himself,
there wasn’t room for anyone else. The date had been just like the night sky,
beautiful to look at but something sinister lurking in the distance.
Good ending. It's better to be single than to relate someone who will never truely care.
ReplyDeleteWhy there are so many people who don't think?
ReplyDeleteCos life would be boring without them ;-)
DeleteYou've got the point here...
ReplyDeleteTed in probably an example of a man who thinks he is all that counts
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