Here are six of my favourite poems from the Poetry Friday collection. Leave a note in the comments on which is your favourite, or maybe nominate your own.
Voyeurism
Silky stockings
stretch
over her
fingers
then slide over
sleek, shapely legs.
Her black dress
tumbles and ripples,
then is soothed
by hand.
She dabs
perfume on her neck
as she slips into
her heels,
and inspects
herself in the
full-length
mirror.
Her eyes are
different from mine.
Mine approve,
admire, adore.
Hers find
fault, see lines,
admonish for
the pastry at
breakfast,
the skipped gym
class.
And curse her
mother
for the hips
she inherited.
She sits on her
bed and lights a cigarette;
blowing out
smoke from her ruby lips
Then she checks
the time,
extinguishes the
light and
goes out into
the night.
All the time
unaware
that this
secret artist
was painting
her soul.
Moustache Clinger
Grampy’s hot chocolate
is going cold
I watch his whiskers
waver
in the whistle of his
breath.
The skin on his drink
is grey and wrinkled
like the skin on his
face.
I stir constantly,
to make sure the skin
doesn’t form on mine.
And then drink from the
spoon
because no one is
watching.
With a snort, a
snuffle, a sniff
Grampy is awake.
‘Oh hot chocolate,’ he
declares
as if it’s a surprise.
He takes a mouthful
and smacks his lips.
The skin clings to his
moustache.
Changes
She stares.
Her eyes drinking in
every detail of the
familiar.
How the back has more
hair now
than the head.
The belly is rounder
The legs look shorter.
His arm still bulge
with muscles and strong
shoulders.
He doesn’t smile.
He used to.
Does she love him?
Or does she love a
memory of him
which lurks in the
shadows
of her mind?
Is she the cause of
what she sees?
Or would it have
happened
without her?
If she leaves, will he
recover
that lost sense of joie
de vivre?
And then, would she
love him
again?
Slow realisations
Sometimes
the penny
doesn’t
drop,
because
you
don’t
want to let it go.
You
don’t want to know
what’s
scaring you,
staring
you
in
the face.
So
you hold that penny
tightly,
digging
fingernails into
your
palm until it hurts.
But
you still keep hold
of
that precious
coin.
Apart
The
week
became
a month
became
a year
you
changed your hair
I
change my postcode
suddenly
we
were strangers
best
friends
separated
by
silence.
In between kisses
A shared bag of chips
and
a couple of silk cut.
Blowing smoke rings
in between kisses.
Smiles in our eyes,
and smiles in our
bellies.
Then with salt on our
fingers
I walk you home.
Laughter in the air,
whispers on the
doorstep
in between kisses;
Trying not to wake
your mum and dad.
One long lingering
kiss.
then the landing lights
comes on.
You turn the key,
I skip home.
I can't decide really. The last one is lovely, romantic, full of joy and happiness but the Slow realisations one although realistic is somehow touchy and it made me to read it again and again. And the first one has lots to do with imagination i guess and it drew my attention as well as it has a sense of mystery from my point of view.
ReplyDeleteThanks, I can't decided either and I am not even sure these are my top six.
Deleteso far I've had two votes for the last one and one for Apart and one for the first one :-)
DeleteSlow realizations, Moustache Clinger, Voyeurism, Apart win the first prize:-). The poems are great!
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